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Balance of Payments of The United States comprises three accounts namely: current account, a financial and capital account. Current account details international trade and net domestic income as well as direct payments made to The United States whereas the financial account represents variation in international asset accumulation. Lastly, the capital account as the name suggests numerous financial transactions that do not affect economic output. These records are of essentiality to the country as it enables determine if the country is capable of sustaining the consumption of imports as well as stabilize the country’s economy. Balance of payment also illustrates country’s contribution to the world output, if it is a net consumer or a net producer. Net consumers are those countries with balance of payments deficit such that they import more than they export. They are hereby dependent on the aids and grants to run their economy. This type of economy leads to poverty and gradual economic growth.

Grammar
"Payments" do not need to be capitalized. Also, your title has U.S. To be consistent, please use U.S.

Content
This word is not needed and seems awkwardly placed here.

Organization
Good job on writing a clear topic sentence.

Style
The way in which you wrote the listings is confusing. I would make this "financial account, and capital account."

Style
To make this sentence more fluid, you can add an article at the beginning of this sentence.

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Hi. Is my grammar okay?

Oct 23, 2018 at 11:25 AM

Klacsanzky

Now that I have gone over your entire essay, I can say you need to work on your syntax, or how you order words. There are many incomplete sentences, run-on sentences, and awkward constructions. I think it would be good for you to study more about sentence construction. This resource can help you: http://www.learnenglish.de/grammar/sentencetext.html.

Customer

Thanks for the information and observation. What should I do next for the order?

Oct 23, 2018 at 11:30 AM

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Well, I will mark this order as finished, and you can release the payment for the help.

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Alright, it’s been enlightening working with you. I hope the next essay I send will be better :)

Oct 23, 2018 at 11:48 AM

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I hope so too :) Thanks for using our service.

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